Hi, it is undoubtedly an excellent image and the comments that I am going to write to you are from my point of view and may not coincide with that of another astrophotographer.
First of all, I see the dark nebulae as too contrasty, which makes them lose their naturalness. Perhaps it is an excess of BXT or contrast, but from my point of view you should lower the sharpness in those areas, which will give you more naturalness.
I leave you an image where you can compare:
https://app.astrobin.com/search?p=eJy7WVKSWlFiq2rupGpkVJaYU5oKpFWNHYFkRmpiiqqRQUZ%2BUTFY0MgZSOYmli RnhFQWIJQ5%2BviA2OYuaonliUUptqqmIKMy80tSQMKmLmoFiemptoZgKjizCsg0MAAAJc8iTA%3D%3D&i=6198#fullscreen
On the other hand, if you can, lower the exposure to NGC 2023 so that some structure appears.
Lastly, and this is a very personal point of view, the Alnitak flash is very long, I don't know if that's how it appeared in the photo or if you are using a program like Starspikes. If you can control it, try reducing it a little to see if you like it better.
As I said, the photo is very good.